Treatment-Draft

This is the draft I made for our treatment

Mr Tamworth is a highly qualified doctor who a few years ago incidentally wasn’t able to save a young girls life during an operation, Emily, who is the only daughter of Mr Pratt who had already lost his wife in tragic car accident. Mr Pratt went through traumatic incidents which lead him to become a mental patient at Springfield Hospital.
One day Mr Pratt escapes from the hospital, he had spent his entire time at Springfield’s coming up with ideas to get his revenge on Mr Tamworth as he believes was to blame for Emily’s death. Later that day Mr Pratt goes to Mr Tamworth’s house posting a threatening letter. Knowing that Mr Tamworth has a daughter of his own he had had the perfect plan to kidnap his daughter Heidi.
Heidi is a bright young girl who attends Burntwood School. After school that day, not realising, Mr Pratt is waiting outside for Heidi. As he pulls up near the gates and pulls Heidi in the car whilst she picks up her phone call from her dad, but doesn’t get a chance to listen to what he has to say.
Mr Pratt takes Heidi to a deserted building where he threatens to kill her. He makes Heidi call her dad and tell him to come to the deserted building but if the police come he would kill Heidi. However Mr Pratt still wants to kill Heidi in front of Mr Tamworth like he had to watch his daughter die.
Mr Tamworth turns up with the police and medical nurses that take Mr Pratt back to Springfield Hospital.

By Anam Nasir